WHAT I WILL DO:
Unlike most editors, I consider my role to be a mentor or a coach. Instead of just telling you what is wrong, I explain how to correct the problem, and I work with you to teach you how to write effective prose.
More than 50% of my business is repeat business, and I relish establishing long-term relationships with other writers.
I will treat you with respect and compassion. All criticism will be of the constructive sort. My purpose is to improve your writing, not to destroy your confidence. I will mark your manuscript, correcting grammatical and spelling errors and suggesting alternative wording where appropriate, line-by-line. Highlight areas that are especially well-written, so you will know where your strengths are. Where appropriate, I will offer suggestions for plot development, character development or other areas that could be strengthened. I will return a two-to-four page written analysis of your work. This will include evaluation of: plot, setting, characterization, dialogue, special effects (flash forwards, flashbacks, etc.), voice, point of view and any other areas particular to your work. If appropriate, I will recommend reading or resources to strengthen your areas of weakness. I will answer any questions you may have via email. I will provide my telephone number for a personal followup, if you desire.
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